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I was cleaning out my old files the other day and found a drawing I had done two years ago, a portrait of my ex's eye. It took me aback when I saw it. I never realized when I originally drew this how much I had captured him.
Seems like a world away.
Below is an exerpt of a poem I wrote around the time I drew this...
I think it expresses what I was trying to capture.
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My beautiful you
It hurts to watch you bleed
The merciless anguish you drown in
What do I hold,
my breathing mystery?
Such a dark light
Such a grown up little child
So old in your weariness...
I hear you crying
my quiet symphony
I feel you creating a songbook
as pure as your pain
phantom melodies hidden in your mind
I hear you crying
my quiet symphony
my unexpressed treasure
my beautiful you
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Please view my DA Poetry Account:
Seems like a world away.
Below is an exerpt of a poem I wrote around the time I drew this...
I think it expresses what I was trying to capture.
------------
My beautiful you
It hurts to watch you bleed
The merciless anguish you drown in
What do I hold,
my breathing mystery?
Such a dark light
Such a grown up little child
So old in your weariness...
I hear you crying
my quiet symphony
I feel you creating a songbook
as pure as your pain
phantom melodies hidden in your mind
I hear you crying
my quiet symphony
my unexpressed treasure
my beautiful you
***
Please view my DA Poetry Account:
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Beautifull! I love it!