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I was cleaning out my old files the other day and found a drawing I had done two years ago, a portrait of my ex's eye. It took me aback when I saw it. I never realized when I originally drew this how much I had captured him.

Seems like a world away.

Below is an exerpt of a poem I wrote around the time I drew this...
I think it expresses what I was trying to capture.


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My beautiful you
It hurts to watch you bleed
The merciless anguish you drown in
What do I hold,
my breathing mystery?
Such a dark light
Such a grown up little child
So old in your weariness...

I hear you crying
my quiet symphony
I feel you creating a songbook
as pure as your pain

phantom melodies hidden in your mind

I hear you crying
my quiet symphony
my unexpressed treasure
my beautiful you






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:iconhakfest:
Sweet Jesus of pie.

Beautiful

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:iconsquirrelnutz:
OMFG. Thats sooooo crazy

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:iconb3l3za:
very good work! I really loved the details!! :clap:

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Wow its like you can see so deep, even tho its only a drawing. Beautifully done.

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:iconearthangeljenna:
That's really great, and the poem is nice too ^_^

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:iconkwsallee:
The eyes reflect so much you can see, in photography the lights of the real spash on the face of them.
A drawing give light to reflections of the heart, the eyes we fill with visions of those things we feel that should have been.
The words of poetry find glowing images penned in ink, the minds eye showing it's vision in lines and verse.

Your skills find expression in all of this. These may be older pieces but they are still very nice. If you couldn't tell, I was inthralled by the reflections in the drawing. :)

Nice work!

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:iconboomslice:
This is beautiful - the drawing and poem.
His loss.
:iconnishma:
ok the eye is grate, i'm sure know that, :) but the song! beauuuttiful!! (the eye also :P!) woww
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:icondeque:
Wow!!!! I just keep being amazed by your talent!
You wish I had half the talent you have. You sketch so perffectly!
This is one is a bit special for me, as I have a thing with close-ups of eyes.
:thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup:

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What a wonderful rendering!

It have been a bit difficult to post this. It's funny how the eyes hold so much... that even a black and white, two dimensional rendering of the human eye can evoke an emotional response.

Nice work!


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